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::EDIT:: Changed melody#s eyes and finished the background
"ssleep little cat... no need to be ssscared. no one will hurt you. i'll keep you sssafe. you can be sssafe in my coilssss!"
A scene from one of the short stories i've written, called "tyler's coils." it has three chapters so far and its really good. especially the third one which i havn';t officially released yet but i have pretty much finished it.
basicaly in this story melody the cat goes into the girl's bathroom aat school and finds a snake in there that hypnotizes her and makes her go away and return later with 1 more person, and she comes back with ichigo
in the secodn one they go and get more people for him to hypnotize, in the first one there is a tiny bit of the characters wetting themselves since they're in a bathroom and very relaxed. the second one focuses on this and gets a little disgusting in some places but has some nice hypno scenes.
and in the third one tyler (the snake) decides he needs a change and goes for a very big score. you'll have to read it to find out. this one is just about hypnosis. no vore or anything
anywho this scene is from the first chapter (the smallest) when she turned away towards the mirror to resist tyler and then looked up at the mirror to try and look at him without looking into his eyes y'know? but HE was looking into the mirror anyway so she ended up being caught anyway. and good for her~
also in the story he begins to wrap her up around this exact moment XD infact i think he already should be. so thats her situation lol. she's being wrapped up. and hypnotized ofcourse.
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i drew this once before, but it wasnt quite as cute as this, but i liked it anyway. but for some reason i can't find it ANYWHERE so i decided at last to re-draw it. i really like it. especially the pose.
the way tyler is coiled around her like that... it's like he's holding her, but without actually touching her. it sorta says subconciously to the person in the middle "I'll protect you"... like "Let me be around you like a sheild so i can protect you and keep you safe" so she is very much relaxed right now. it's kinda sweet actually. he's coilign her with the safety of his personal space XD
i coloured this using my "coloured outline style" i used in thsi pic [link]
that style is liek the child of my other two styles XD the regular "thick outline" style and the very difficult but rewarding "soft outline" stile.
it took a little work but i think it looks good.
also i know her eyes aren't looking in the place she's supposed to but it looked cute like that XD
also technically they should be the other way around, he was supposed to be on her left shoulder, it's from the point of view of looking at the mirror if you can't tell. the toilet cubicle there is to their left behind them. so he's on her RIGHT shoulder instead of the left. but it's no big deal, there's nothing actually IN the story about which side he's on but i just pictured it that way. but its cute anyway and im proud of this one.
I'm doing my commissions i swear XD im just struggling with them so this was kinda a break.
Melody the cat and Tyler the ball python are © me
hope you guys like it! check out the rest of the stuff and my personal site: [link]
If you read all this... you get a llama XD (unless I already gave you one X3
Also i need help thinking of a proper name for the pic. any ideas?
your comments re appreciated!
::EDIT::I came up with a title. it's full title is Let me hold you in Reflected intimacy. i CAN actually fit the whole thing in. i even tried putting the "let me hold you in" in colon brackets and that fitted too.
but i just thought Reflected intimacy sounded better, shorter and sharper youknow?
X^'
"ssleep little cat... no need to be ssscared. no one will hurt you. i'll keep you sssafe. you can be sssafe in my coilssss!"
A scene from one of the short stories i've written, called "tyler's coils." it has three chapters so far and its really good. especially the third one which i havn';t officially released yet but i have pretty much finished it.
basicaly in this story melody the cat goes into the girl's bathroom aat school and finds a snake in there that hypnotizes her and makes her go away and return later with 1 more person, and she comes back with ichigo
in the secodn one they go and get more people for him to hypnotize, in the first one there is a tiny bit of the characters wetting themselves since they're in a bathroom and very relaxed. the second one focuses on this and gets a little disgusting in some places but has some nice hypno scenes.
and in the third one tyler (the snake) decides he needs a change and goes for a very big score. you'll have to read it to find out. this one is just about hypnosis. no vore or anything
anywho this scene is from the first chapter (the smallest) when she turned away towards the mirror to resist tyler and then looked up at the mirror to try and look at him without looking into his eyes y'know? but HE was looking into the mirror anyway so she ended up being caught anyway. and good for her~
also in the story he begins to wrap her up around this exact moment XD infact i think he already should be. so thats her situation lol. she's being wrapped up. and hypnotized ofcourse.
--
i drew this once before, but it wasnt quite as cute as this, but i liked it anyway. but for some reason i can't find it ANYWHERE so i decided at last to re-draw it. i really like it. especially the pose.
the way tyler is coiled around her like that... it's like he's holding her, but without actually touching her. it sorta says subconciously to the person in the middle "I'll protect you"... like "Let me be around you like a sheild so i can protect you and keep you safe" so she is very much relaxed right now. it's kinda sweet actually. he's coilign her with the safety of his personal space XD
i coloured this using my "coloured outline style" i used in thsi pic [link]
![[link]](https://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://temaki.webplus.net/failed%20rescue-1.jpg){kind=link}
that style is liek the child of my other two styles XD the regular "thick outline" style and the very difficult but rewarding "soft outline" stile.
it took a little work but i think it looks good.
also i know her eyes aren't looking in the place she's supposed to but it looked cute like that XD
also technically they should be the other way around, he was supposed to be on her left shoulder, it's from the point of view of looking at the mirror if you can't tell. the toilet cubicle there is to their left behind them. so he's on her RIGHT shoulder instead of the left. but it's no big deal, there's nothing actually IN the story about which side he's on but i just pictured it that way. but its cute anyway and im proud of this one.
I'm doing my commissions i swear XD im just struggling with them so this was kinda a break.
Melody the cat and Tyler the ball python are © me
hope you guys like it! check out the rest of the stuff and my personal site: [link]
If you read all this... you get a llama XD (unless I already gave you one X3
Also i need help thinking of a proper name for the pic. any ideas?
your comments re appreciated!
::EDIT::I came up with a title. it's full title is Let me hold you in Reflected intimacy. i CAN actually fit the whole thing in. i even tried putting the "let me hold you in" in colon brackets and that fitted too.
but i just thought Reflected intimacy sounded better, shorter and sharper youknow?
X^'
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Technique ImpactYet another intriguing picture by good old Xai. Before looking into it at full view, I was impressed by the thumbnail and the in depth was sure to please. Since I imagine this wasn't a huge project I'll try to be easy on it, but still point out the details. While your snake work is always excellent (your cartoony style is entertaining and unique) I happened to find some flaws with the character and background scene. Mostly my complaint is the background, but something about the tail and use of gradient on the ears just sticks out to me. The tail could be argued as fine, but looking at the fur patches I just seem to assume there'd be some detail to the actual tip or side. For the gradient ears (which really pop out for me) I'd suggest either using a grey instead of black or maybe a light blue sticking with the tone of the character.
For the background, I notice a lot of space not being used (along with the cracks that could have used some revising or shading) at the top. Perhaps you could have done (in a weak colour) some writing on the wall or graffiti? I apologise if I was diving too deep into it, I just love seeing your work at its best. All around good job <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title="Thumbs Up"/>I trust since I read the entire description I get a llama soon :3 Can't wait to see your further works. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
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