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Just something i wrote when i was feelign kinda horney. A number of people have asked for me to do art or fics of anime chars with snakes rather than just furries. so here it is. my char Kaori and a lamia based on this: [link] just i changed the name just now cus iwasnt comfortable with it. see if you can spot a small easter egg there. hint: you wont guess it if you don't know any of my characters!

i was REALLY nervous and unsure when i was writing the hentai part of it. ive never even drawn hentai before much less written about it, ive only recently gotten a feel for it.
but as you can probably tell im very well exercised in the hypnosis scenes.
i might attempt a few scenes from this in drawings.
okay when i say might i mean ive already started >.> ... but im unsure if ill succeed or not.

anyway. a few things i need to say that i didnt get a chance to say in the text or i forgot:
- the lamia knew kaori's name cus she got her to tell her while she was hypnotised.
- it starts off in their hallway by the front door in kaori's house
- kaori lives alone with her mother (in actuality she doesnt have one, her mum was made up for this story)

i was gonna end it with kaori getting home after befrending the lamia but i dunno it seemed like too much work and the whole pont of the lamia doing that was to eat her anyway, and thats what the people reading this would want anyway ^-^
its strange, but writing the vore scene was a relief to get out of the hentai scene >.>
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Holy sh...
Okay, that is really an incredible story!

Did you ever plan to write more stories with Okama?
I really enjoyed reading this story, and would be happy to see more of Okama or other lamias / nagas from you.
Keep up the good work!